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However, based off of other posts from the OP, it seems like the story takes place in Europe; it begins in Poland, and ends in Ireland, with the protagonist being born in Ireland.The story also takes place during the 1700s, so it may not be accurate historically to have a protagonist from a completely different part of the world since, I’m assuming, long distance migration wasn’t as prolific back then.That being said, there are still things that can be done differently to make this protagonist not look like «reddit’s dream girl,» like you said, and I think that would add some depth to the story.I think /u/chai chino is a canada goose uk outlet really good artist and this is a Canada Goose Online strong illustration, but I just wanted to give feedback because she asked for it. 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